Still noon in the paddy fields
in Kerala, we sank a well
to stem the flow of desert,
but came up smelling of dust.
Watched rice plants wither as the slow sun
silenced resolve in angry glare,
and warm dry gusts scattered
hope to the four corners.
In Palakkad, an empty street, sold
to ten million-dollar-a-day death,
men nurse wounds and children.
The women have gone to find water-
when the supply runs altogether dry,
we may find out how to swallow
the dust. Or our pride. Lesson taught,
we shall learn to drink coke.
Still noon in the baking heat
within the walled compound, we
stand around on wounded feet
spreading slurry on the ground.
So here, at least, is water
(to dampen a capital purse)
So here we earn our living -
a litre a day (could be worse).
Outside, the world is barren,
the earth is cracked and bare.
As boreholes tap our reservoirs
at last we’ve learnt to share.
So desert soil is progress,
and bitter stench is joy.
Infected feet dance to the beat
of the jingle writer’s bitter-sweet
irrigation for the soul.
















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"So here, at least, is water
(to dampen a capital purse)
So here we earn our living -
a litre a day (could be worse)."
is my favorite. So poignant. So depressing. So wonderfully accepting.
The only changes I would make to this would be to ease the flow up. Especially around verb tense. It seems to get a bit weird in spots.
Very, very wonderful job.
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Reads a whole lot eaiser after knwoing the article - my mistake
I love the sarcasm. Especially,
"at last we’ve learnt to share.
So desert soil is progress,
and bitter stench is joy."
The "(to dampen a capital purse)" does seem to break the rythm.
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have a starrymajig my dear for being so damn good...
i wish this was the poem i had to anaylse for my english GCSE last week (cultural poetry)
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